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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 19:22:25 GMT -5
I'm looking for a somewhat easy-to-remember love poem that is at least 10 lines long. I would like it to rhyme and it can be a poem that you wrote. The reason why is because I need to memorize a love poem and recite in front of the class tomorrow and I don't have one. Any suggestions? ;D
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Post by Kuromai on Feb 13, 2007 19:40:45 GMT -5
...From the Stellar that can play with drama like a puppet? I'm shocked. *gasps*
In the dark of the night
From which you come shy
I see your soft shadow
Shillouete on the sky
A short breath is taken
My pace matching rhyeme
With that one for a moment
To stretch over time
Then the passing is gone
Your warmpth felt never more
From the one I call love
The one I adore
.....BEWARE! *falls over* Yeah, That only seems good for each verse by itself to me, but whatever. And it doesn't seem to have a right ending o.0 ...and the second verse is my favorite...^^;
Cut and control if you want XD
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Post by Ravenpaw Sweetsoul Wolfkit on Feb 13, 2007 19:41:08 GMT -5
Forbinden Love
Writen by: Wolfie
Love
Forbinden Love
Can love truey be Forbinden
It can be lost
Forgoten
Fake
Meaningless
Cruel
and even Unwanted
But Can it be Forgotten?
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 19:43:59 GMT -5
Kuromai- Can you say who wrote it too?
...if you wrote it then that's awesome!
Wolf- Your poem is great but unfortunately my annoying teacher will not count single words as a line so I can't use it... T.T
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Post by Ravenpaw Sweetsoul Wolfkit on Feb 13, 2007 19:48:31 GMT -5
It's ok doesn't matter to me
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Post by Kuromai on Feb 13, 2007 20:01:44 GMT -5
....I wrote it myself....which actually ends up normal posting really hard, because then you want to rhyme @.@
*ignores many spelling mistakes* ^^;
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 20:07:46 GMT -5
Kuromai, do you have a title?
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Post by Galli on Feb 13, 2007 20:08:48 GMT -5
Well... *foot shuffle* I suppose you could use "Ashes." I'm going to use it though...: my heart leaps up when I see you cry tears that love, tears that lie when I know you’re not the case that there is more behind her pretty face when I watch you stroll on by don’t you wish you could see her cry because you never cared at all because you just want to watch her fall and she still wonders, she still prays that maybe things would be the same but as she beats you back with words and scatters your ashes to the birds and as she laughs you into your grave you wish it was sooner when you came Yah... I wrote it and think it's really bad, but my class seems to think it's amazing.  |
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 20:11:54 GMT -5
If you're going to use it then I can't use it T.T Do you have another?
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Post by Kuromai on Feb 13, 2007 20:13:44 GMT -5
Not really. o.O I guess I'd just call it "Passing". *shrugs*
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Post by Galli on Feb 13, 2007 20:16:59 GMT -5
Uh... *looks* There's my cruddalicious sonnet. Why don't you use "Betrayal of Love?"
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 20:18:03 GMT -5
Galli, do you think that Ms. Lombino would count Kuromai's poem as 12 lines even though they are all chibi? (Chibi X3)
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Post by Galli on Feb 13, 2007 20:20:15 GMT -5
I dun think they're chibi. Thanks for the candygram btw. ^^
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Post by Thunderstar♥ on Feb 13, 2007 20:22:39 GMT -5
Love
Love can be Forbidden
Love can be Hidden
Love can be Found
Love can be drowned
Love can be you or me,
Love can be a plea
For a shining star,
Going faster than a car,
Love can be lost,
Love can cost,
but I can never be forgotten.
It SUCKS. I know and I ish sorry. T.T By: ME.( Ferny)
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 20:25:19 GMT -5
@.@ How do you know I sent you a candy gram? They don't arrive until tomorrow? T.T
Do you think I should use "Betrayal of Love?" Written by me.
(For those unknowing or have forgotten:
Betrayal of Love
If love were greater than the greatest sea
Then nevermore shall it drown in sorrow
With eternal despair that my soul shall be
In the misery that awaits tomorrow.
If love were sweeter than the greatest dream
Never would it have thrown my heart aside
And ridicule my false hopes with eyes of gleam
Then shun all of the tears I have cried.
How I have begged for Fate to lead the way
And to make my dreams become with my lover
Only to be used as a toy and thrown away
To discover my dreams belonged to another.
My eternal tears bleed as my heart begins to ache
For that there is no real cure for heartbreak.
Yeah. Cryptic and morbid. I know, it's my specialty.)
*sigh* Currently I'm deciding to either use Kuromai's "Passing" or this one. Or I could use the "Cold Crush".... (a.k.a. My Heart Leaps Up..)
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Post by Galli on Feb 13, 2007 20:27:23 GMT -5
there's been so many
such a long past
a long winding road
where cement won't last
changing like oil,
smooth as the tide
and you're the only one
who thinks it's all right
do you know how much you're talked about?
have you never considered sorting things out?
but all you ever do
is change the old for new
yet they're back
in your arms
again
A three minute poem titled... uh...... "..."
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Post by Galli on Feb 13, 2007 20:29:51 GMT -5
Use it, Stellykins... "Betrayal," I mean.
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 20:30:26 GMT -5
Ferny- No it does NOT suck. *huggles* It's wonderful! But I have a question: Is the last line supposed to be "but I can never be forgotten" or "but it can never be forgotten."?
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Post by Thunderstar♥ on Feb 13, 2007 20:46:04 GMT -5
Sorry, It's 'but it can never be forgotten' not I
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Post by .:Stellar:. on Feb 13, 2007 21:09:32 GMT -5
Okay, I think I'll either use Ferny's poem, Kuromai's Passing, or my Betrayal of Love. I have to say that I thank you from the depths of my heart for all of your support and time. You all have such beautiful poems and I don't know how I could ever return your favor. Please don't be disappointed if I don't use your poem; it's my teacher's fault  So, I thank you all for helping me out! *huggles everyone that posted in this board* I have to leave now so bye! *waves* |
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